When I was just five years old,
And my grandma used to ask that,
How those small red flowers are looking?
Last year I could see them clearly,
Now seems my eyes has become older,
And tell me more about its leaves,
These old eyes are unable see its eternal beauty,
Every morning I used to copy cuckoo’s chirpings,
The more I used to create the sound of CUOOOOOOO,
The more cuckoo was teased,
And I did keep on making this sound,
Until cuckoo used to fed up with my mischievousness,
After that my silent face without having any regrets,
Was always a bitter surprise for my grandma?
Now you are happy anu?? Cuckoo has stopped chirping.
And like always I had a very innocent answer for this,
Oh grandma she has become tired now and has gone to take her breakfast,
Will come back soon and then we shall start again,
You tell me are you capable enough to see those magnificent flowers,
Or today your eyes have become older than yesterday?
And my fervency eyes had nothing to worry about,
Still this Semar is standing at its own place where it was then,
Today again red flowers are strewing their smile on Semar.
But numerous things has been changed now,
My grandma is not with me to ask about these flowers,
And those cuckoos also don’t sing their melodious song.
Looks like they have also become reserved like we humans..
Having immeasurable thoughts in the foothills of my heart,
I really miss those moments and specially that cuckoo..

32 comments:
Waah! So B'ful Anu!
Grandma + an old tree + voice of a cuckoo = Heaven :)
wow...that was very well written...sorry abt ur grandma...i hope the cuckoos comes back again and sing the melodious songs for you...:-)
Cheers!
SUB
thanx sanjana
@sub hope cuckoo comes back. he he thanx a lot
Anu! It's Beautifully Explained, the Relationship between the Generations, Scenery & Some UnAnswered Questions between them.
It is Good dat I m Posting again, Better Late Dan Never!
wow shahbaaz nice to see u after a long time..thank u so much to like to this poem..
unbelievably awesome :)
sound of CUOOOOOOO.....bahut kuchh yad dilaya ....
thanx a ton rachit. @monika ji thank u so much for reading my blogs regularly and appreciating me.
Beautiful! :)
@guari thank u so much
Just a wonderful poem with images that I can virtually see..
@icy bc thanx for lovely comment
hey anuradha..nice poem! I also teased d cuckoo d same way :)
First vist.Nice lines
thank u so much monu awalla nd and Kparthasarathi.
@monu thats very nice that i have some1 who used to the same like me.
Hey, Hi
its like a saying my friend once told me...i would like to share it with you...
"Day by day nothing changes, after a period of time when you turn back, everything has changed"
its not verbatim,but still...
A beautiful post...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
That was beautifully written!
Nice lines.:)
Brilliant composition!
hey this is too cool...very nice..beautifully written with enough details...
we all have similar memories....we all were love to mimic/copied CUOOOOO(cuckoo), sounds of peacocks, sounds of midhouse bird(sparrow)....and mostly crow....
sach mein wo bachpan ke din..full of our innocence...sab kuch yaad aa gaya is post ko padh kar...
thanks for sharing...
thank u so much everyone to read my poem and for dropping ur valuable comments
Awwww.....
Anu this was such a touchy post. Took me back to my childhood days. There used to be a mango tree in our yard and i used to tease the cuckoos just like how you did.well, not teasing really, but just fascinated by their sweet voice, I used to imitate them too.
Once again, very nice post.
Cheers
Always Happy
/Or today your eyes have become older than yesterday?/
such wonderful lines... this sort of insecurity looms as we grow old..
nice post
and thanks for your visit.
@always happy a very warm welcome on my blog. at last u visited n read it.thank u so much for the this lovely appreciation...
@adityasaravana thanx for the visit and for this encouragement..
nice poem
trees and plants and birds do listen to us...watch us...see us... while we move on, they remain for another generation... life is like that :)
@deep thanx a ton for visiting my blog......
childhood,innocence,birds,butterflies,trees,flowers,friendship with them etc etc...you make me nostalgic.....those were the days...i too miss them!
lovely read :)
thanx soumya
It was a lovely read !
A beautiful poem...
Keep Writing :)
Take Care.
ahh thax a ton fatima for liking it and dropping ur comment.
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